Blackdrago666 Otakami
Number of posts : 988 Age : 34 Location : the uk tipton west midlands Reputation : 0 Animunny : 1046 Registration date : 2009-09-16
| Subject: first try at writing lyrics Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:26 pm | |
| Always was a music writer, never had a at writing lyrics.(not seriously anyway) the song is called "Remember me lover" its not gonna some stupid love ballad song as people would guess. "Remember Me Lover" I didn't want to feel like a slave to your mood swings And I'm not saying anything I wouldn't say behind your back And all this shit could have happened to anyone All that matters now is how you gonna pick it up to throw it back
It's so hard to get along I always know what you're gonna say This too: I hated you I wish you'd learn to keep your mouth shut
I never meant to start anything that I couldn't finish Now I gotta be the one to turn away, it's time to react I meant every word that I said, yeah I really did But you gotta understand that I was sleeping then So relax
I walked away, now remember me lover I told you lies, now remember me lover I took your money, remember me lover I ruined your life, now remember me lover
It's so hard to get along I always know what you're gonna say This too: I hated you I wish you'd learn to keep your mouth shut
I've been through this with you about a hundred times Agree to disagree, start again, with our lives Then every single morning I wake up and you're still there But tomorrow you will be alone and that is all you deserve
I walked away, now remember me lover I told you lies, now remember me lover I took your money, remember me lover I ruined your life, now remember me lover
It's so hard to get along I always know what you're gonna say This too: I hated you I wish you'd learn to keep your mouth shut | |
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playful_kitty_17 Otakami
Number of posts : 1096 Age : 33 Location : wouldn't you like to know ;) Reputation : 9 Animunny : 1162 Registration date : 2009-09-17
| Subject: Re: first try at writing lyrics Wed Nov 04, 2009 10:51 am | |
| Wow... This is intense. Really really good though! I like it. It really captures the angst of a bad breakup. It would make a good therapy song | |
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Blackdrago666 Otakami
Number of posts : 988 Age : 34 Location : the uk tipton west midlands Reputation : 0 Animunny : 1046 Registration date : 2009-09-16
| Subject: Re: first try at writing lyrics Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:34 pm | |
| thank you! funny enough I broke up with my girlfreind a week ago...although I didnt think about it when I wrote the song | |
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playful_kitty_17 Otakami
Number of posts : 1096 Age : 33 Location : wouldn't you like to know ;) Reputation : 9 Animunny : 1162 Registration date : 2009-09-17
| Subject: Re: first try at writing lyrics Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:18 pm | |
| Wow. I hate breakups... I'm sorry =( but this is an excellent song =) sounds kinda like one I wrote a long time ago | |
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